Wednesday, 24 June 2015

Independent Writing

We worked hard on our independent writing today.  Our stories were about Archie, after a visit by him and his Mum, Stacey.  Here are our stories...


The baby boy is called Archie and he likes me.  - Jack


I can see Archie.  - Kai


Archie is little.  He is cute.  - Leroy


Archie is cute.  He has short legs.  - Kane


Archie is here at school and Stacey is here too.  - Ambrose


Archie is little.  Archie is 4 months and Stacey is Archie's Mum.  Stacey is big.  - Amber


Archie is a baby.  - Olive


Archie.  He is my friend.  - Riley


Two little fingers.  Two little feet.  - Kaiza


I saw Archie dribble.  - Isla


Jack and Devin are holding Archie.  - Devin


Archie is lovely.  - Kaleb

Thanks for coming to see us Stacey and Archie, we wrote great stories after your visit!

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